[sha2017-orga] Booklet feedback request, BEFORE wednesday 20:00
Moem
moem at hack42.nl
Tue Jul 11 14:06:20 CEST 2017
Elger Jonker wrote:
> As we expect lots of feedback, please share feedback in a brief, bulleted list with page number per item. That way we can process it sequentially and be reasonably sure all items have been handled. <blink> Do this before Wednesday evening 20:00. </blink>
* As much as I like the shruggies background on the pages, it makes
things harder to read.
* Apostrophe catastrofe: on page 11, 'thousands of of hours went into
creating SHA and it's magic'. Unless we mean 'and it is magic', please
get rid of the apostrophe.
* Same page 11: 'there is most likely a an (educational) task'.
* Page 22: cigarettes, not sigarettes.
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