[sha2017-orga] Booklet feedback request, BEFORE wednesday 20:00

[Claudia.Borges]

Devil is in the details, even when you choose for anti-design:

1- Header with different font sizes looks kind of messy to me
2- Also, header, if you a letter aligns with the line of a color block 
you divide the word
3- Depending on the kind of print, the shruggy background will make the 
text less readable
4- Probably (depending on the size of the print) the text underneath on 
the cover will not be readable
5- I hope you think of a more sustainable way of printing / no 
laminating and other plastics.

Cheers
Claudia



Moem schreef op 2017-07-11 14:06:

> Elger Jonker wrote:
> 
>> As we expect lots of feedback, please share feedback in a brief, 
>> bulleted list with page number per item. That way we can process it 
>> sequentially and be reasonably sure all items have been handled. 
>> <blink> Do this before Wednesday evening 20:00. </blink>
> 
> * As much as I like the shruggies background on the pages, it makes
> things harder to read.
> * Apostrophe catastrofe: on page 11, 'thousands of of hours went into
> creating SHA and it's magic'. Unless we mean 'and it is magic', please
> get rid of the apostrophe.
> * Same page 11: 'there is most likely a an (educational) task'.
> * Page 22: cigarettes, not sigarettes.